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    dots Submission Name: A Word, Sorrydots
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    Author: NixLacus
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 5/11/24
    Words: 161
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    dotsA Word, Sorrydots
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    There is a word that I have heard so many times
    A word that must have different meanings for different people
    Word which seems to be flung at me with ease yet no meaning
    Sorry is that word
    A word that I was taught to mean that it would never happen again
    A word seeking forgivness
    I've heard that word so many times that it hurts
    When someone says they are sorry a change should follow
    Something should stop or start
    Good should follow
    To me however sorry is just another empty word
    You never changed after any of the times you said it to me
    Never bothered to keep the promise which sorry binds
    Sorry is just a hollow word that means nothing to me anymore
    Means less then nothing
    Means so little it hurts everytime you say it
    Cuts at my heart everytime it's used
    Slashes my dreams that maybe you do actually care
    Sorry
    Just a hopeless word




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      Thank you for the feedback, glad you understand, I know everyone has that one person who destroys the word sorry for them. I don't mean that the word sorry is completely meaningless just that there are some people out there who use it so meaninglessly that you slowly started to lose faith in the meaning of it then that makes it harder for you to believe when others say it. Just thought I would clear that up with anyone reading this.

    ~ <3 ~ Nix ~ <3 ~
    | Posted on 2009-01-12 00:00:00 | by NixLacus | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like it. I think that you could have made it longer. I can relate to it. When you say: When someone says they are sorry a change should follow
    Something should stop or start
    Good should follow
    I think I get it the most because it is the truth. A lot of the times good doesn't come because as you say:
    Sorry is just a hollow word that means nothing to me anymore
    Means less then nothing
    It is a hollow word. It means virtually nothing, I just don't fell for it. When sombody says it, I know they don't mean it. You really did a good job. I'll read more of your writings. Have a nice time at/with what ever you do.

    ~Zanna
    | Posted on 2009-01-10 00:00:00 | by stormybluerose | [ Reply to This ]


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