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    dots Submission Name: Unifying Theories of Lovedots

    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 305
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsUnifying Theories of Lovedots

    Unifying Theories of Love

    In the face of savage law
    And brutal nature
    The needs of survival can only be tempered
    With love

    This is the triumph of awareness

    Undivided in this emotion
    Of unity

    We are redeemed by the edicts
    Of love
    Brings us all then
    To this single banner
    Its peace a proposal
    Wedded to the Earth

    The manifold examples
    Distinguished such universal
    Of understanding
    Engenders forgiveness
    To the eternal sacrament
    Of the sacred pool of life

    Seen within a single reflection
    The countless faces
    Mirrored interactive their essence
    Through the knowledge
    Of heart
    To procreate the messages
    Written in the birth
    Of love

    Soil to root
    And speaks of nurture
    Sacrifice and release
    Of love

    This clear spring well of spiritual flow
    Unburdens the sorrow
    Of blood
    Is reunited to existent cause
    Of the grace
    To stand or fall
    By its name

    Sheath of bark protecting
    Stonewall crystal
    Populates every atom
    This cradle implicit
    Between animal soul of heaven

    By guidance
    All is its want
    Named in the first
    Of its love
    But for the sake of love
    Loves path alters
    Encompasses all the twists
    And turns

    Love becomes a complex simplicity
    But still suffuses
    Within macro-cell
    The resonance of creations
    Resounding bell
    Rings out the vibration
    Of harmony

    Tree shade
    Mountain air
    Sun warmth light
    All the fruits
    Of natures devotion
    Without question
    Tender their presence
    In love

    And enfolding soothing arms
    Cuddles all
    To a gentle breast
    The same arms that reflect
    Such a savage nature
    And brutal law
    Tempered by the needs of survival
    With love

    This is the triumph of awareness

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