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    dots Submission Name: Semaphore Heatdots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 196
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 490
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    dotsSemaphore Heatdots
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    Semaphore Heat

    Spank you naked
    Shuddering
    Whimpering
    Penetrating
    Slick
    Red slap mark
    To wet fingers
    Taste
    The slit
    Of your running

    Quivering
    Shakes
    The intensity
    Of bone sheathing
    Silken
    Flesh feminine
    Woman
    Feline eats
    Me

    Hung by
    Ecstasy
    And rampant
    Devours
    Sexual
    Wantings
    Heeding
    Needing
    Burning
    Break upon your skin
    The carnal
    Craving

    Begin again
    The sweat
    Of your sermon sigh
    Your screamed
    And aching
    Thigh
    And tourniquet
    From lips
    Each gripping seconds
    Kiss

    Rape
    And rapine
    Slapped
    In tenderness
    Relinquishes
    Softness
    Compliant in palms
    Plaint kneading
    Of erotic flash
    Through eyes
    Desperateness
    Sucks my soul
    To your arching

    Pressed
    Apparent longing
    Calling
    To the take

    Drain me
    Dry in your lake
    Of my obsession
    The ratchet click
    Tightens
    Me
    To starving mouth
    Suckled on
    Compulsive urged
    Breasts

    Again
    Let me eat
    Your sighs
    Let veins rush through
    Succulent
    Semaphores
    Of greedy
    Desire

    Wolf hours
    Howl my moon
    To Isis
    My Goddess
    Princess
    My centre
    My life
    My lover
    My slave of passion
    You destroy me
    You remake me
    Reborn
    In your arms













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