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    dots Submission Name: Pull Me Throughdots

    Author: RedRoseofBlood
    ASL Info:    19/f/outsideyourwindow
    Elite Ratio:    3.34 - 592/582/135
    Words: 184
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsPull Me Throughdots

    I woke up earlier than usual today
    Your name still on my tongue, my bed in disarray
    The dreams I have of you now are eerie and strange
    Compared to when we were together, such a drastic change
    I used to enjoy waking to distant recollections of our last embrace
    Now I wake up in a sweat, my hair matted to my face
    It should be getting better, it has been too long
    Sometimes I think I am over you, but then I hear our song
    I canít handle myself after everything turns black
    When all the memories of you come rushing back
    Like the time we walked hand in hand in the dark
    Back to where your car was parked
    I miss you terribly
    And I canít understand how you could have left me
    I know it wasnít your fault, you werenít even driving
    But the pain I feel because of your absence has left me writhing
    Now my life is not mine but instead I vow to live it for you
    And that vow will just have to pull me through

    Submitted on 2008-12-11 19:43:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hey and hi
    this was a good feeling poem of thoughts and i would also say self healing

    | Posted on 2008-12-11 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]

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