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    Author: _proper_noun_
    ASL Info:    20/m/OK
    Elite Ratio:    5.36 - 106/88/24
    Words: 143
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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       Pretty much where I'm at. As lost as I am, it's okay, because lost with a direction will lead to not lost eventually, I think.


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    Every force that can be defined has to have an opposition to be compared to. If we are to be defined by our own merits we must become our own opposition and choose which side will be the dominant factor in our being. Otherwise we are simply defined by that which we are not. I am not you, you are not me, and they are not we. This has become the habitual way of satisfying the need to attain our own entropy, but it is only an anecdote for the true disease. The only way to cure ourselves of our self-decay and depravity is to become the abrasive self we hate and accept it as a true part of our existence. Only then can we grow in ourselves. This is the one and only way to achieve self-actualized human entropy.

    Isn't it?




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      What do you mean by human entropy?

    Is thgat what were actually trying to achieve,Im not gonna wiki it untill you tell me lol

    But I guess your thoughts are interesting,Ive jut turned 20 myself so I can understand the loss of direction kind of if you dont have on

    So...Ive decided that Ive self-analysed more than enough for one life time,I have to find some new aspects of my charicter to love hate etc,cos none of them surprise me anymore haha

    Everyone needs their own flip side I suppose,an alter ego for balance,like black and white except thats so clich that Im sorry I said it (for the bazzillionth time)

    I get what your sayin,but I cant seem to elaborate properly,Ive gotten tired of theorys and stuff,think I must be in a romantic phase of life where I dont actually want explanations for anything,

    it would ruin the surprise

    but anyhow

    thank you for sharing,good louck in the 20s

    -Craig
    | Posted on 2008-12-13 00:00:00 | by Raphael | [ Reply to This ]


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