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    dots Submission Name: rebirthdots

    Author: Beulah
    Elite Ratio:    4.78 - 588/414/44
    Words: 24
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 790
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 233

       finding a new meaning...

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    newfound source

    of infinite grace

    longevity transposed

    through your warmth

    no longer

    dependent on



    Submitted on 2008-12-12 15:25:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I've had to read and reread this one several times... but for me it holds a promise... of finding a new source of light after being kept in the dark for a long, long time... you're being given a new lease on life and also a new depth to experiencing life... well... don't know if I'm on the right track though.
    | Posted on 2008-12-27 00:00:00 | by sugar-n-spice | [ Reply to This ]

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