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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 24
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Puppets

    Philosophies
    Of fear
    And divine
    Retribution
    In deaths
    Promises
    Of never ending
    Tortures
    Will never
    Let you
    Enter
    heaven





    Submitted on 2008-12-13 17:00:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Interesting. This is really different and special in its own kind of way. I'm unsure of how I feel at the end of it. Do I feel sad? Unsettled? Enlightened? It seems to be a mixture of all three.

    In a nut shell, I liked it. Good job.

    | Posted on 2008-12-14 00:00:00 | by Celeste J. Bell | [ Reply to This ]


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