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    dots Submission Name: My CDs and medots
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    Author: XxSkyelerxX
    ASL Info:    12/Female/Varies
    Elite Ratio:    3.07 - 11/27/16
    Words: 252
    Class/Type: Poetry/What you did
    Total Views: 1275
    Average Vote:    4.7500
    Bytes: 1605



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    dotsMy CDs and medots
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    You claimed you love me
    With all your heart
    And now that you're gone
    You've torn it apart


    But I'm doing just fine without you
    Just my CDs and me
    I'm happy the way I am
    Just my CDs and me
    There's no one else
    Just my CDs and me


    It came out of nowhere
    And just like that
    You're gone
    And now anyone's up to bat


    Because I'm doing just fine without you
    Just my CDs and me
    I'm happy the way I am
    Just my CDs and me
    There's no one else
    Just my CDs and me


    Now just wait and see
    How rich you're making me
    Because everyone gets famous with a heart
    A broken, torn apart heart


    I know I'm doing fine without you
    Just my CDs and me
    I'm happy the way I am
    Just my CDs and me
    There's no one else
    Just my CDs and me


    I hope you're happy
    With what you've done to me
    Because I sure am
    Truthfully, honestly


    Because I'm better of without you
    Just my CDs and me
    I'm proud of the way I am
    Just my CDs and me
    There's no one else I'd rather be
    With just my CDs and me


    [Repeat, fading out]
    Just my CDs and me, and me, and me
    Just my CDs and me
    Just my CDs and me, and me, and me
    Just my CDs and me




    Submitted on 2008-12-13 20:16:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I like it amanda, but you might want to fix your thirty seventh line with the word "of" to "off" :] Love ya GAL!
    | Posted on 2009-04-06 00:00:00 | by Scaredheart | [ Reply to This ]
      Thanks Hannah. I love what Sorn did to it, though. ^-^ It made it so much better.
    | Posted on 2008-12-14 00:00:00 | by XxSkyelerxX | [ Reply to This ]
      I love this Manda :3 It's very well written
    | Posted on 2008-12-14 00:00:00 | by nekochan765 | [ Reply to This ]
      I think I should have had less choruses and paired the verses together... But this is what I have.
    | Posted on 2008-12-13 00:00:00 | by XxSkyelerxX | [ Reply to This ]


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