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    dots Submission Name: forgottendots
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    Author: isaiahc4
    ASL Info:    26/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 120/198/62
    Words: 158
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    why does something oh so simple
    hurt in ways cant concieve?
    how can every waking moment
    cause a man like me to grieve?

    How is it, I feel this tormet?
    How is it, it never fades.
    With no room for inbetween now
    I will find no shade of grey.

    are my ears so keen for hearing
    that I hear these echoes still?
    Echoes of a life forgotten
    thought by most to be unreal.

    am I cursed or blessed to see
    things from which you've all been spared?
    or am I cursed to live in wander
    when you all just cieced to care?

    it seems that youve easily forgotten
    all I've seen and felt through time.
    Maybe it is just so easy
    to just leave the pain behind.

    I have been so, now forgotten
    there are none who still believe.
    just remember when I'm gone.
    Its you who took this life from me!




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