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    dots Submission Name: The True Dreamdots
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    Author: Cora Windover
    ASL Info:    1,292/it/Radiant Garden
    Elite Ratio:    4.16 - 862/761/201
    Words: 208
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 85
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    dotsThe True Dreamdots
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    streetlamps paint a reddish glow
    in the window of the room i stay
    one-half a bed, one-half a soul
    on purple sheets, on pillows gray.
    my mind detaches, as it often does
    in the predawn light as i try to fall asleep
    restless, searching for the one i love
    reaching for the one not here.

    my mind will creep into the house in which you sleep,
    my heart will slide against the blankets you lay under
    my soul will come to rest against the hollow of your chest
    and that is where i truly slumber.

    and i'll be sleeping as you wake, for sure
    as you collect the pieces of your consciousness,
    as you gather what you need to go to work.
    i will stay with you as long as nature lets me,
    until the fickle lord of time awakes me.
    i'll try to leave what love i'm able to
    before your love returned pours back to me,
    filling the bucket of my self-imposed insanity.

    my mind will swirl in the pattern of the thoughts you think
    my heart will beat with the rhythm of your bloodstream
    my soul will then attach to the wings against your back
    and that is what i'm truly dreaming.




    Submitted on 2008-12-14 14:08:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Good but is the love so strong that it dabbles in obsession and insanity?
    | Posted on 2008-12-15 00:00:00 | by Doublefeather | [ Reply to This ]



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