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    dots Submission Name: Jack Frostdots
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    Author: Demoncat
    ASL Info:    14/F/USA
    Elite Ratio:    1.18 - 1/5/11
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 835
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 838



    Description:
       Jack Frost is a bitter cold person...unless....


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    ~Jack Frost~

    I make the trees wilt and die away.
    I give everyone a reason to not go outside and be isolated from the world
    I give that a fiece wind that brings tears to your eyes
    I am the bitter cold
    Untill I heard two words that never have been spoken to me by a young child


    "Thank You"


    The coldness of my heart started to melt away
    As I felt a new feeling I never had before
    It wasn't the bitter wind I blow on faces
    But warmth all over my rock skin
    It wasn't that electrifying chill up spines
    But a warmth in my chest
    It wasn't like when feet were frozen like ice dropings
    But feeling like I was floating, with a odd feeling


    "Joy".




    Submitted on 2008-12-14 17:27:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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