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    dots Submission Name: And Sometimes.....dots
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    Author: daughterofdeath
    ASL Info:    18/F/West Virginia
    Elite Ratio:    4.83 - 262/263/207
    Words: 191
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 154
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1235



    Description:
       Not finished, but I'm working on it. Sometimes it's just hard for me to write about him.

    Dedication: Christopher Lynch


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    dotsAnd Sometimes.....dots
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    I sit here,
    Alone and hoping you'd hold me in your arms.
    And my tears,
    Falling because I fell for all your charms.
    I believed
    That you would make this worth what I been through
    But nothing
    Could make up for what I put up with you.

    And sometimes,
    I wish things would go back
    To the way that they use to be.
    And sometimes,
    I wish that you'd show
    That you really loved me.
    Sometimes you make me feel
    Like I don't matter to you.
    And sometimes,
    It seems as if we're through.

    I wish,
    That I wouldn’t always feel so left out.
    And I want
    For someone to tell me what the secret's about.
    But I don't
    Want to have to let you go.
    But happiness
    Seems like it was so long ago.

    And sometimes,
    I wish things would go back
    To the way that they use to be.
    And sometimes,
    I wish that you'd show
    That you really loved me.
    Sometimes you make me feel
    Like I don't matter to you.
    And sometimes,
    It seems as if we're through.





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