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    dots Submission Name: In the Silencedots
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    Author: elephantasia
    ASL Info:    37/F/UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 398/490/160
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsIn the Silencedots
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    Seeds splitting
    Taking root
    Cells crafting stems
    Leaves unfurling
    Bonnets blooming
    Colours unwrapping
    Their precious gifts.
    Pollen wafting
    And alighting.

    Rain in the drop
    Snowflakes on noses
    Air mingling with breath
    Sunshine beating
    Wind resting.

    Hair curling
    Pupils dilating
    Eyes talking their
    Intimate secrets.
    A smile beaming.
    A solitary tear,
    F
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    Death’s embrace.

    The moment before
    a baby's first breath,
    the mother holding hers,
    anxiously waiting.

    Both darkness and light.

    Silent miracles everywhere.

    If I were blind
    And could not see such things
    Still they would prevail,
    Regardless.

    Velvety nothingness.

    Love.

    Grace.

    GOD.




    Submitted on 2008-12-15 19:35:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love the
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    Sends a message on many levels and this piece embraces a sense that you and Nan and I seem to be in tune with.

    Great!
    love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
    tif ~*~
    | Posted on 2008-12-18 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      Hi Kate,

    I think that when we give up our personal attachment to God we remember the ideas you've written here.

    I too, am one who tries to master the void, only to see what new vistas can climb into my imagination. In every breath, it all becomes new. It's a courage that makes us explore and never do we have to struggle, other than choosing to enter the darkness,
    even there, light is present.

    Lovely write,

    Nan
    | Posted on 2008-12-17 00:00:00 | by nansofast | [ Reply to This ]


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