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    dots Submission Name: Letdots
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    Author: elephantasia
    ASL Info:    37/F/UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 398/490/160
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 739
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    Description:
       A rewrite of an earlier poem


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    dotsLetdots
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    Let the wheel turn.

    Let water find a path through the rocks.

    Let it flow.

    Let frustrations melt like snow on a winter sun day.
    Let happiness spread like bunnies left to it ;)
    Let smiles break your frown.

    Let us roll like stones and gather no moss.

    Let mud cleanse us.

    Let us spot a sliver of light in darkness and
    Let us find ways to move towards it.


    Let the sun smile it's warmth into our hearts
    Let the rain shower on us it's cleansing blessings
    Let the tensions of the day be flushed away.
    Let the clouds come and go.

    Let love in.

    Let go.




    Submitted on 2008-12-15 20:34:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Yes, Let the sunshine in.....I love your pieces too and I really needed this one today!

    With many gracious thanks and much love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
    tif ~*~
    | Posted on 2008-12-18 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      Hi Kate,

    This is a sweet write about how we can sit and watch light move into our hearts. It's always there and waiting for us to give up our fears and overcome our trials. It reminds me that every day is a chance at happiness and love.

    Beautiful, much love,

    Nan
    | Posted on 2008-12-17 00:00:00 | by nansofast | [ Reply to This ]


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