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    Author: Myopic
    Elite Ratio:    2.31 - 31/58/63
    Words: 217
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Description:
       it's about school, the college by my house, and taking a poetry class.


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    From my
    summer
    days
    my
    days not blank like
    white sheets
    my summer days
    are days
    of days
    of bad grades
    If the man
    with the red ink hand

    sees my soul
    prunes my branches
    rakes my leaves
    my
    lynch mob Christmas tree
    their
    black tangled ornament,
    the
    carrion flower blooming from my chest
    fertilized by flies,
    charmed to the alive that dies
    All walking home in unison to function.
    Alone, cold to bones,
    watching the lights shake, getting blown
    by the wind.




    Submitted on 2008-12-15 20:48:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Looks like you got something out of the class. You've got some gripping imagery. I had trouble with the flow but on second and third readings, I got a better idea where you were coming from. Your imagery pulled me in. - Jim
    | Posted on 2008-12-16 00:00:00 | by my shadow | [ Reply to This ]


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