i like this because i can relate 2 it verrrrry personally, *sigh ...women. i dont have much else 2 say, it speaks the truth in a simple and creative way. thanks...i will look at snowflakes differently from now on. ;p
Good work on the subject of deception. The sway of words are like a see-saw,like wind blowing the snow. Your last two lines are the mime of the story. Deception lasts until the truth is known then the deciver is branded forever. I especially liked the first two lines. Rain(the liar), snow(the gullible), two twins diffrently dressed.