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    dots Submission Name: The Dark Saviourdots
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    Author: ParanoidParadox
    ASL Info:    20/m/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.47 - 85/76/32
    Words: 240
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 85
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1670



    Description:
       Part 1 of a story Im writing through freehand poetry


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    dotsThe Dark Saviourdots
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    She unwittingly looked towards the sky
    Only to gaze oblivion in the eye
    Teetering on the edge of oblivion
    A gust of threats pushing her
    The threshold only growing closer
    Ground beneath her cracking and giving way
    Voices barking orders to only jump
    As a thousand wounds open up in her
    Hives of blows brought down
    Her battered, bloody body twitching
    Half-lidded eyes counted among the flies
    Buzzing already ringing in her ears
    Growing louder still
    Whirlwind shouts more like solemn whispers
    Tendrils from the sky creeping forward
    Begging her to give in
    To no longer fight the pull

    Foundation finally falling
    The mountain of resolve crumbles
    Spiralling her into the abyss
    What was meant to be a death rattle
    Becomes a gurgle
    Spilling warm red from her mouth
    Wretching all life away
    A final cry to the sky while weeping inside
    Shaking hands reaching
    Hoping to find a final hope
    Between Heaven, Hell, and High tides
    From Gods to insects
    Cold fingers wrapping around her
    Taking her to a place far from pain
    When the grasp was broken

    From darkness, he answered her call
    Cutting through eternity till reality returned
    Ripping the throats that ordered her
    Breaking arms that came down
    Within his embrace was she calm
    Warmth returning to her face
    Her first and her last
    Future and her past
    But nothing’s meant to last
    A promise of return
    When many seasons pass




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