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Author: save me
ASL Info:    19/F
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Words: 103
Class/Type: Random Thoughts /Misc
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Without you, my days would be colder.
My nights so much lonlier.
My clear skies, suddenly struck with a thousand gray clouds.

Now that i am gone,
think of me as the wind blowing through your hair,
i am the rain that soaks your cheeks,
the blade of grass beneath your feet.

For i am still with you,
even if you can't see me,
you can feel me.

Listen closely to the wind,
and you will hear my voice.
Stand beneath the beating sun,
and you will feel my warmth.

I am still here.
I am still with you.

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