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    dots Submission Name: A Kissdots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 130
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsA Kissdots
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    A Kiss

    so much more than lips
    meet
    those composed writings
    of wanting
    swirl in hot breath
    before they meet
    and hesitate
    to trample the dew
    of love in a kiss

    a kiss
    Juliet asked "what's in a kiss?"

    and every presence longing
    hangs on its signature
    with a secret language
    etches its pronunciations
    not in words
    but in the soul
    its messages imparted

    a kiss

    transmutations explicit
    is a fairy of tongues
    and a rogue
    of lust
    a winged beast
    of desire
    a god mother
    of wishes

    a kiss

    the parted petal separated
    whimpers vocal
    in sustenance needed
    a survival
    of uninterrupted truth
    everyone knows
    what is revealed and hidden within

    a kiss

    has its own
    kissing language




    Submitted on 2008-12-17 16:16:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was written very well and very beautifully.
    I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the great work, and I'll keep reading

    »Haely«
    | Posted on 2008-12-20 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]


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