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    dots Submission Name: There's no love in outterspace, we can'tdots

    Author: Cannablisjunkie
    ASL Info:    22/Male/Indianapolis, IN
    Elite Ratio:    2.59 - 77/147/87
    Words: 131
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsThere's no love in outterspace, we can'tdots

    With the earth still hanging on its axis,
    and the stars collecting more dust and gases
    there's enough hope in falling ones to pass us
    bringing our smiles, and extra closeness
    back the fastest..

    But, awe like stars fall babe suddenly so will we..
    daily, nightly, it's an all the time kind of thing.
    And, I know those words mean more to me
    one two three means I love you,
    'yeah, you too baby.'

    There's nothing to be compared by her beauty
    even with behind her an evening sky so missleading..
    Because, love in outterspace for us is non-exisisting,
    there's no oxygen, never has been.

    But, in a perfect space still with gravity
    where we could breathe we'd coincide perfectly
    in a nebula never so agreeing.

    Submitted on 2008-12-17 20:02:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Thats nice man, thats it it was just nice!
    | Posted on 2008-12-18 00:00:00 | by Dead Bell | [ Reply to This ]

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