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Author: Raindrops
ASL Info:    25/f/Pennsylvania
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Words: 122
Class/Type: Poetry /Religious
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Written on November 28, 2008


So blessed we are
to have all this
at our fingertips
and not want for a need

Its all freely given
put right into our hands
we keep taking
and never give thanks.

Well, I know where it comes from
its You who makes it ours
I smile and laugh inside
because I know I'm taken care of

You give me everything I need, Lord
and for it, I have no worries
it is how it should be
and how it will be for years.

I may not be rich in money
or have everything my eye desires
but I am rich in you, Oh Lord
and have everything my HEART desires.

Thank you.

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