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Heart Warming Christmas


Author: Raindrops
ASL Info:    25/f/Pennsylvania
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Words: 129
Class/Type: Poetry /Religious
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Written on Dec. 16, 2008.


Heart Warming Christmas



Filled with beauty
from all around
mostly ignored
from the chaotic sound

Remember why we have Christmas
it's not about santa
or candy and bliss.
The real meaning is so easily missed

If you feel so alone
and the winter is bitter cold
look around you and listen
be silent and know

That Jesus holds you tight
He's never left you alone
He's given you beauty from all around
for you to enjoy.

So listen to the sound...

..of the soft falling snow
go dance in the cold
enjoy the ever warming glow
of a crackling fire.

The strong warmth in your heart
will find its way through
the cold bitter nights
when you remember
that Jesus has never left your side.




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  not much so say on this
cause there is nothing to really


pretty and hear warming but thats all ready been said




peace

and merry christmas to you and yours
| Posted on 2008-12-21 00:00:00 | by spoonfedprop | [ Reply to This ]
  Very Pretty! A message we all need to hear right now.

| Posted on 2008-12-19 00:00:00 | by lynn7 | [ Reply to This ]
  It is heart warming to see someone posting Christmas poems! This is delightful, and thanks for posting, lovely lady!
| Posted on 2008-12-18 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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