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    dots Submission Name: My Musedots
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    Author: SDodson
    ASL Info:    18/f/fl
    Elite Ratio:    4.65 - 35/22/21
    Words: 46
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       For a long time I couldn't write anything, the words wouldn't come to me the way they used to. My muse had left and so I went uninspired for a good 2 and a half years.


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    dotsMy Musedots
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    Just beneath the surface
    Rise to the light
    Hidden in the depths
    Cower in the night
    Words once lost
    Now are found
    Flowing
    Arching
    Becoming profound
    Muse, you were gone
    And yet you returned to me
    I was so blind
    Your invisibility I did not see




    Submitted on 2008-12-18 23:12:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Mm, I like how this kind of employs Amazing Grace into the lines. I usually don't like rhyming poems, but you did it quite nicely :]
    | Posted on 2008-12-19 00:00:00 | by wovenwords | [ Reply to This ]


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