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    dots Submission Name: Speakdots
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    Author: SDodson
    ASL Info:    18/f/fl
    Elite Ratio:    4.65 - 35/22/21
    Words: 261
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 886
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1678



    Description:
       For someone I greatly cared about so long ago. Like I have said before, I do not regret what I did just how I did it and now even 3 years later I wish that I could somehow bring some real closure to the situation, for my own sake. I dono't even know why, it's just my impulse. I wish he understood, even a lie would be good. Something.


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    dotsSpeakdots
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    It's like you never knew
    That it hurt me
    What I did to you
    It's like I never told you
    Truly how I felt
    Now before your hurt
    Is where I have knelt
    You probably don't care anymore
    Now that I do
    Ignoring my message
    Closing that once open door
    I don't want things to go back
    I'm fine with my life
    I don't want to be your lover
    I don't want to be your wife
    I just hate to be ignored
    I'm sorry
    I'm so sorry if it seemed as though I got bored
    We were so far apart
    Worlds away
    I wanted flesh
    I wanted something I could see
    You were coming
    But then you'd be going
    I couldn't take that hurt anymore
    Torn and conflicted
    I shut my own fingers in that door
    He's good to me
    Just talk to me and you would see
    I want you to be happy
    I'd like to be friends
    I know it's been so long
    But I don't know where that ends
    Don't leave my pleas unanswered
    You were so strong
    A loving voice
    When I needed a bond
    You were good to me
    I threw it away
    But that however is a discussion
    For another dying day
    Start small
    Like it did before
    We won't go too far
    Don't even look at that door
    I need to know it's ok
    What happened in the end
    I need to know it's ok
    Even if you won't be my friend

    This is my final plea
    Bitter Sweet
    Just talk to me




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