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    dots Submission Name: Wisdom is She dots
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    Author: lovedeathsdeath
    ASL Info:    20/M/NCUSA
    Elite Ratio:    5.28 - 39/43/33
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsWisdom is She dots
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    She is calling.
    Into the streets
    I go.
    No answer.

    Another cries.
    Lured by charm
    I go.
    Arms await.

    Again she calls
    I turn away
    To find
    Only wind.

    Returning now
    To the diamond
    I gaze
    Into distortion.

    She is calling
    Me but now
    I stay.
    I cannot hear her.

    Folly is here.
    She is now my Ruin
    When I am deaf
    To a whisper.




    Submitted on 2008-12-19 18:14:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      an interesting fusion of metaphors: she being the personification of wisdom, of finding this in life, out on the streets, somewhere. but where is she? you cannot find her. only wind answers you. as you search for diamonds amidst piles of coal.

    sharply stated.
    cheers, yeah.
    | Posted on 2008-12-20 00:00:00 | by meoww | [ Reply to This ]



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