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"I Wish You Love"


Author: Ron Cole
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This is a re-post, probably because I like this poem so much. I brought it forward for the benefit of some of my more recent viewers, although I hope my regular friends here enjoy reading it again also! Happy Holidays all!


"I Wish You Love"



I take up pen
from far away,
and hope my letter
will brighten your day.

It's again that wondrous
time of year,
when bright lights glow
and holidays are here!

And, of course I wish you
lots of things;
peace and joy,
and diamond rings!

I wish you carrolers
at your door,
and a charming tree
to adorn your floor!

I wish for presents
neath your tree,
and Christmas Lights
for all to see!

I wish you God's peace
from above,
and, most of all
I wish you love!

Ron Cole
Christmas 2008




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  Ron, thank you for the sweet poem.
My favorite holiday is Christmas.
Families being together, singing carols, trimming the tree, baking lots of goodies, watching Christmas movies and seeing the excitement on the faces of the children opening their presents!
I wish we could feel that way all year.
Renee
| Posted on 2011-06-24 00:00:00 | by reneeskorner | [ Reply to This ]
  Again, another re-read but I enjoy the sentiment we should practice year round in giving of Love, Peace, Joy, Abundance, Beauty & Prosperous Healthy Smiles to Share ;-) ;-) ;-)
| Posted on 2011-06-12 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
  Nice man. awesome poem, suits the time of the year!
| Posted on 2009-12-19 00:00:00 | by 13thprotector | [ Reply to This ]
  And I wish you the same!
| Posted on 2009-01-13 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]
  A lovely holiday poem. Wish you a happy new year!
| Posted on 2008-12-30 00:00:00 | by isis_lenore | [ Reply to This ]
  Love is truly the greatest gift of all, and your charming prose has shown that very well.

Another wonderful poem, Ron!
As always, thanks for sharing it with us.
| Posted on 2008-12-28 00:00:00 | by latentlylyrical | [ Reply to This ]
  Merry Christmas Ron and lots of wonderful wishes of love here!

Enjoy the day with love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
tif ~*~
| Posted on 2008-12-25 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
  Aww Ron...this is such a very nice and sweet poem. Definitly something to put in a home made Christmas card? Wonderful! I love it so much Ima add it to my faves!!


Kris
| Posted on 2008-12-24 00:00:00 | by Raindrops | [ Reply to This ]
  Wonderful wishes, Ron, and a lovely Christmas poem. May your Christmas be joyous and your New Year a happy one. Sharon
| Posted on 2008-12-20 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
  this was very cute, i liked it. the way it flowed was wonderful and the idea for it was very good. nice job
tayla aka sickofhurting u
| Posted on 2008-12-19 00:00:00 | by SickOfHurting U | [ Reply to This ]


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