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    dots Submission Name: Valentidots

    Author: saika
    ASL Info:    17-F-chicago
    Elite Ratio:    1.74 - 2/5/8
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 639
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 771

       Frankly i don't think it's my best work....
    i will take both negative and positive comments i've heard them all before....

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    There's no reson for me to hid my feelings anymore
    I need to tell you
    I want to tell you
    But something is holding my back.....

    What is this feeling in my heart.
    I've never experienced something like this before.

    You and I are ever so different.
    And yet we are the same

    Oh my dear love please accept this
    It is a present for you...
    It is a rose....

    I do not care if you don't love me
    All i know is that i love you....
    I will do anything for you...
    I can and will make this work

    Even if you push me away
    I will aways be there....
    Protecting you...
    Loving you

    I Love You.....

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