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    dots Submission Name: The Rowdots
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    Author: CrypticBard
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 369/381/227
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    There is maybe
    in each burst of
    energy, a product
    of fanaticism filling

    the air or the cities
    when the limbs
    of trees hail the
    soldiers to the war.



    Perhaps in each
    bellow the burst
    of energy produces
    fanatic followers.

    Perhaps in each
    gust the rush of
    wind uproots all
    modicum of calm.

    Perhaps in each
    caterwaul the limbs
    of protest raises
    interjective receipt.

    Each is a product
    maybe without
    hope of reprieve:
    alone in time; Perhaps.



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