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    dots Submission Name: Troth of the heartdots

    Author: CrypticBard
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 369/381/227
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       Something a bit fitting for the time of year.

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    dotsTroth of the heartdots

    Love's illusion is
    to believe the best,
    to hope the best,
    and to love the best.

    Some call it foolish optimism,
    some brand it the blindness of love,
    and some condescend,
    labelling it infatuation.

    This fact escapes the skeptics-
    What the heart chooses to believe
    the mind begins to see.
    The magic of love sets free.

    Submitted on 2008-12-22 11:16:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      omg. you rock!

    this is such a beautiful thing to teach; more a philosophy lesson than a poem - what i really like about it!

    'What the heart chooses to believe
    the mind begins to see.
    The magic of love sets free.'

    i have recently begun discovering my own heart. for true, it still remains a mystery, though i consider that it will be my joyful challenge to unravel myself for the many years to come.

    best for your unravellment, too :)

    | Posted on 2009-01-04 00:00:00 | by biska | [ Reply to This ]

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