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    Author: intangible
    Elite Ratio:    0.23 - 0/1/2
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    has it been so long...
    you can't remember our december?
    and prolonged..
    how we weathered through the weather?
    it's so wrong---
    but so true, I know you,
    both face and heart- like so few,
    "go to-- go get it"---
    that's the old you
    So don't sweat it

    I've been so lost,
    a chronic disease,
    my silence is ended,
    it's the phonics with ease.
    you don't have to apease
    my better judgement
    but you can love it or hate
    for what i wasn't




    Submitted on 2008-12-22 14:01:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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