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    dots Submission Name: Newdots
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    Author: SDodson
    ASL Info:    18/f/fl
    Elite Ratio:    4.65 - 35/22/21
    Words: 242
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
    Total Views: 1053
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    Description:
       It's been 3 years for so many things, 3 years since I met my husband, 3 years since I left my boyfriend, 3 years since I quit speaking to the one friend I cared for most, but most importantly 3 years since I have been depressed. If you read my poetry on Sarah Leger I was always going back in forth with the way I felt, never truly happy but tasting it now and then. That has not happened in so long. I thought once that other people had the power over me to take my spirit and plunder my thoughts, I know that is different now. I am my own woman and should be loved with all the love I give. The only people I protect now are my family, that is the only people I am satisified protecting, I once wrote "Am I destined to be just a house wife?" At one time I thought that was nothing but now I know it is so much more than it seemed. I am so happy with the choice that I made and I hope you can see that and relate to it. If not oh well, it doesn't matter anymore and though I would like to know what you think of my write I'm not begging for anything from you because I know in my heart that this is as much of my soul as those old writes were form so long ago.
    Enjoy.
    Blessed Be


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    When I think about the days of old
    And how my notions
    Were never too bold
    I remember the pain that once engulfed me
    I hope that now
    You see what I see

    My wings have spread
    I'm soaring high
    A halo covers my head
    Simple laughter
    Sweet thoughts
    I listen for his pitter patter

    Love with a love
    I am Annabell Lee
    Quet for quote
    With a sonnet so profound
    Listen for my voice
    Above the retched sound

    I am letting go
    Of the past inquisitions
    String my bow
    Arrow in the night
    A warrior ready to take flight

    Hug me close
    Kiss me softly
    All I need is us
    All I need is me
    They say "True love conquers all"
    I didn't truly believe that till I felt the fall

    Soaring in the sky
    Cutting the wind
    Mighty sword in my hand
    Defending only them
    Feel my softness
    A tender love

    Know this
    As I know this
    I am an angel sent from above
    You cannot take me
    You cannot cut my wings
    No ripped flesh
    No covered scars

    I am but one layer
    You tried
    You failed
    I am a woman
    I have prevailed
    Quest no more for my pain and strife

    My journey just beginning
    The old one at an end
    I am whole
    I am complete
    I am a mother
    I am his wife







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      BRAVO BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!
    A Superbly worded write and the kind I Truly enjoy the Most
    AN HONEST WRITE SPOKEN STRAIGHT FROM THE HEART!!!!
    Please I Beg You keep that Posittive mindset you have found because PLease Trust me on this I know through experience it will guide you to Happiness
    I am Making this a Favorite!!!!!!!!!!
    And Thanks Be To THe Heart For Showing You The Path To True Happiness!!!!!!!
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2008-12-26 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      I'm dismayed that no one has commented on your heart spilling evolution.
    Something we all go through as humans, the reflections of our actions at times moves us to examine ourselves and to makes changes not to step backwards.
    This was a powerful right, self examination.
    Your new skin is what you make of it. . . . .

    Your new Friend
    T.REDD
    | Posted on 2008-12-25 00:00:00 | by T.Redd | [ Reply to This ]


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