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Winter


Author: Sephiroth
ASL Info:    22/Male/WA
Elite Ratio:    4.07 - 60 /67 /29
Words: 52
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
Total Views: 856
Average Vote:    4.0000
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Feel free to offer suggestions. I just got bored and I'm quite hungry.


Winter


Even in the deepest hour of night
There is never a time of true darkness.
Reflected off the snow,
Through the shadows, lives light.

Even when you can hardly see
Just look for the dim glow.
For you I will always be there.
All you have to do is find me.




Submitted on 2008-12-24 10:14:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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