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The Unseen

Author: Midorininja
ASL Info:    16/secret/Michigan
Elite Ratio:    2.03 - 6 /9 /11
Words: 64
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
Total Views: 747
Average Vote:    3.0000
Bytes: 402



The Unseen

Starring at the blank screen
Thinking of all the unseen
Wondering what might come
Good in the future for some
Love is near
All is here
The ones I love
All are up above
Care for me
I’ll be all I can be
Just for them
Crying when
I need them most
Starring at a blank screen
And forgetting all the unseen

Submitted on 2008-12-24 15:54:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Great poem, but try to work on your grammar. I liked it, is made sence so I give you a thumbs up. You could say like; No sight, Of this unseen world, blind love, not a wonderful sight. I'm very sure that wasn't good, but it would be easier if it was my poem :) Lol, keep up the effort!!!
| Posted on 2009-01-31 00:00:00 | by Sunnehbabe | [ Reply to This ]
  Does it suck?
| Posted on 2008-12-29 00:00:00 | by Midorininja | [ Reply to This ]

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