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    dots Submission Name: Mentors Never Diedots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       A very quick but heartfelt piece - I just found out that one of my favorite bosses and mentors passed away this morning in Houston from a heart attack/cancer.

    I learned very much from Dennis - not just about sales and the oil/gas patches but about life, patience, true success and perserverance.

    Many gracious thank you's Dennis! I can envision you NOW an angel still out there selling "iron" to the other angels and having a great laugh!

    He always called me "Sug" and I'll never forget him!

    Merry Christmas with love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
    tif ~*~


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    dotsMentors Never Diedots
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    Dennis Wheatley
    my mentor
    today was your
    last day
    on this plane

    Fondly
    I remember
    all you shared ~
    A wealth of
    knowledge
    I did gain

    I cry tears
    of passing
    and of heartfelt
    thank you's

    You always
    taught me
    Remember to walk
    in the other person's shoes

    Valuable
    lessons
    A wealth
    of life

    Reminding me
    always
    there is opportunity
    in strife

    I feel you
    today
    as I recall

    Old mentors
    never die
    They just pass
    their students
    the ball!





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    ||| Comments |||
      A wonderful tribute to your mentor, hopefully his teachings will live into the future, as have those of Christ .
    | Posted on 2011-06-28 00:00:00 | by DUSTYTU | [ Reply to This ]
      A really fine tribute, with much heart and soul evident in it. I'm so sorry about the loss of your friend and mentor. I know he beams proudly down at you for your friendship and for your kind remembrance.
    | Posted on 2009-01-15 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      A wonderful tribute! People who touch our lives are never forgotten. May 2009 to a year of happiness and success for you! Sharon
    | Posted on 2009-01-01 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]


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