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    dots Submission Name: faery tales never come truedots
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    Author: ladiesplanet1
    ASL Info:    23.cali baby
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 720/463/165
    Words: 575
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
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       i cant believe its you


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    dotsfaery tales never come truedots
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    you dont even have a connection or an invention not to mention an intention of knowing me from who guess who not you you dont even have a clue of who you really are wanna be you just wanna be me but you cant even see let alone concieve this disease that is so easy to decieve you have decietful tactics so why dont you go recieve my lackins fuck you couch bitch you smackin i could just be smackin you while you lackin me and who would anyone be to believe you over me probably just some dumbass ho tryin to diss the flow but i guess that just goes to show everything you dont know wish you could know bitch youll get ditched quicker than a fat bitch with a fat lip i just want you to suck my dick and ditch cuz your ugly ass face makes me sick youll never get picked youll never make the bomb tick i wish i could just slap you in your face cuz you keep frontin like your really ahead in this race but youre not and thats exactly how you keep gettin caught you know the only thing i feel for you is pity cuz you keep actin like your life is so shitty well maybe if you quit the fuckin grimmy youd know what you got but iot seems like your just waiting to get shot what the fuck do you even give a fuck thats why everyone is lookin at me and not you i wish you would do whatever it is you gotta do and go come on get the fuck up leave shut the fuck up bleed what do you need what do you want from me cuz everything you see is mine and im keeping it cuz all you ever do is grind and you dont share right you barely keep your arms around me tight and its just not right i dont wanna fight and i definately dont wanna fight you faery tales never come true im never gonna let you turn my shades blue if i had to you know i could stick to you but from what i can see from you its not what you really wanna do so im through look at what were going through and im not even anywhere near you with the music youre blasting i cant even hear you in the end youll just shoo the moments we had were few to none it could never be undone you wont be the one to spread the word cuz its already been heard youre like a bird

    i had 52 pilss now theyre almost gone
    cuz i still cant figure out where i belong
    i keep wonderin how weve last so long
    you could never understand how i feel so strong
    with you
    and it still aint true
    im feelin blue
    and i thought you got the clue

    the bitch is on me
    creepin like a freak
    and its always hard to meet
    but that dont matter to me

    someone laced the weed and they gave it to me i was trippin i was slippin i was sippin on a mickeyand i wasnt bein picky i wasnt bein tricky you was sleepy i was creepy i was reading you faery tales that arent even true but you was listenin to the lullabies i fed you




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