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    dots Submission Name: truth revealeddots

    Author: marrymejuliet
    Elite Ratio:    3.04 - 22/15/19
    Words: 196
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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       in response to "i always knew..." written by Demon_666

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    dotstruth revealeddots

    you say you care but dont show
    the love that i would need the most
    you ask what she has that you dont
    but this is the first we talked
    since we died inside
    i saw nothing that shows you care
    i wish you acted on how you felt
    since i have seen you fly in air
    your wings are seen only by me
    and you disagree with yourself
    but never would you even anger
    to show you cared about us
    maybe thats why i need someone else
    i tried my best to win your love
    but no matter whati did it wasnt enough
    so little credit for what i do
    half the time you dont know what it is i do for you
    when suspicion starts in your head
    throws suspicion on my bed
    i wish you knew how i felt
    but no sorrows greater then when we fell
    i asked you most these nights
    to come and save my life
    but nothing you showed looked like love
    i wish you would love with the action youve done
    death plays a beautiful hymn
    if only you tried to show your love for him

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    | Posted on 2008-12-26 00:00:00 | by Demon__666 | [ Reply to This ]

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