[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav

  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav

    << | >>

    dots Submission Name: THE COLOR OF MY HAPPINESSdots

    ASL Info:    22/m/ P.C. FL
    Elite Ratio:    3.89 - 26/26/16
    Words: 414
    Class/Type: Rant/
    Total Views: 955
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2296

       FUCK YOU DIAN!!!

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.


    Black is the color of my happiness.
    A love now tainted by spite.
    a world without her certain death.
    this life as it started is torture.
    NOW my heart cries for redemption.
    It must change , lest we unite for the wrong reasons. Our plans go awry, there is still hope for our future. A woman scorned, insanity the voice of reason. Your nightmare, now the lesser of your two evils.
    my soul's shield now shattered.
    I weep, I weep for love. I weep for life, I beg for you!
    My love and happiness now the same shade as my sorrow!
    I bleach myself with pain, and purify myself with fire!
    Burning Grace reflected in my candle's flame, traced across my bare skin in scars of Brimstone.
    IT ALL FALLS from grace, as do we.
    a happiness short lived, a life's work extinguished.
    I now set a pyre to relight what is burnt to embers.
    Gasoline now pours from my eyes in floods of bloody tears, my words ready to strike like a match, and at the drop of a leaf, a frost falls upon the wood denying the oppurtunity for glory.
    A perfect day ruined by only one!
    SHE took your moment from you as i now take her arrogant bliss to the pit of me and show her true evil incarnate! Let her lock horns in my world! Let her know disgrace!
    SHE will find sorrow, despair, and ruin, I promise you.
    Let us see, Let her KNOW my wrath!
    Signed in blood is my contract, and validated is my toll for vengance! I bring what is to come, and I will not stop it for it is what she truely deserves.
    Sow sorrow in others, and you shall reap a harvest, ten fold the same!
    Let nothing comfort this wretched whore, nor fall right in her life ever more!
    It is in fate's hands now.
    may her final days be as slow as the creeping of the slowest snail!
    Let her suffer in the magnitude of misery and pain she puts on the ones she calls friend!
    In all honesty, fuck her! let her die as she is now, alone and afraid for only her own life!
    SHE is as important to me as a single blade of grass is to the plains.

    Submitted on 2008-12-27 06:44:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!

    ||| Comments |||
      ... ... ... Wow... ... ... that poem reminds me of the love I once felt and now no longer feel. I think the context is just buetiful for those of an angry or broken love. I other than dismal_s child no offence to her do not believe in unconditional love because there is always something that some one wants to change about their love and partner. I used to believe in it though till my ex tried to change everything about me. But yes this peice has deffinatly touch the dark, deep reaches of my soul and remound this soul of the pain inside and i thank you for that. You are an inspiration to me.
    | Posted on 2009-01-06 00:00:00 | by Sepheroth432 | [ Reply to This ]
      So angry love. So angry. Understandable, under these conditons, but still. I love you. Simple, unconditional, love without an end.

    So Smile.
    | Posted on 2008-12-27 00:00:00 | by dismal_s child | [ Reply to This ]

    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?


    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    new moon written by CrypticBard
    I will call out your name written by RisingSon
    Sunset written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Fasade written by jackz
    The Severed Head written by HisNameIsNoMore
    the living moment written by ShyOne
    Primitive Lapse written by Crestfallenman
    Devils in the Details written by endlessgame23
    What happens written by Wolfwatching
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Alone in the Crowd written by SavedDragon
    Push written by JanePlane
    cleverly shunned written by CrypticBard
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (final) written by endlessgame23
    Waiting written by Daniel Barlow
    AI written by poetotoe
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Estranged / Shocks written by Daniel Barlow
    Before, Now, & After written by SincerWritinAsh
    World I No Longer Want written by ForgottenGraves
    Wavelength written by saartha
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Bond written by saartha
    Dashboard Light written by layDsayD
    Happy Saint Patrick's Day written by poetotoe
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (7) written by endlessgame23
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Whiteout written by layDsayD
    4th of July written by layDsayD




    User Name:


    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]

    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]

    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]