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    dots Submission Name: THE COLOR OF MY HAPPINESSdots
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    Author: SAGITTREVEALED
    ASL Info:    22/m/ P.C. FL
    Elite Ratio:    3.89 - 26/26/16
    Words: 414
    Class/Type: Rant/
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       FUCK YOU DIAN!!!


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    dotsTHE COLOR OF MY HAPPINESSdots
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    Black is the color of my happiness.
    A love now tainted by spite.
    a world without her certain death.
    this life as it started is torture.
    NOW my heart cries for redemption.
    It must change , lest we unite for the wrong reasons. Our plans go awry, there is still hope for our future. A woman scorned, insanity the voice of reason. Your nightmare, now the lesser of your two evils.
    my soul's shield now shattered.
    I weep, I weep for love. I weep for life, I beg for you!
    My love and happiness now the same shade as my sorrow!
    I bleach myself with pain, and purify myself with fire!
    Burning Grace reflected in my candle's flame, traced across my bare skin in scars of Brimstone.
    FALL
    IT FELL
    IT ALL FALLS from grace, as do we.
    a happiness short lived, a life's work extinguished.
    I now set a pyre to relight what is burnt to embers.
    Gasoline now pours from my eyes in floods of bloody tears, my words ready to strike like a match, and at the drop of a leaf, a frost falls upon the wood denying the oppurtunity for glory.
    A perfect day ruined by only one!
    SHE took your moment from you as i now take her arrogant bliss to the pit of me and show her true evil incarnate! Let her lock horns in my world! Let her know disgrace!
    SHE will find sorrow, despair, and ruin, I promise you.
    Let us see, Let her KNOW my wrath!
    Signed in blood is my contract, and validated is my toll for vengance! I bring what is to come, and I will not stop it for it is what she truely deserves.
    Sow sorrow in others, and you shall reap a harvest, ten fold the same!
    Let nothing comfort this wretched whore, nor fall right in her life ever more!
    It is in fate's hands now.
    LET IT COME, LET IT COME, LET IT COME!
    I WILL WATCH CONTENT IN HER MISERY!
    may her final days be as slow as the creeping of the slowest snail!
    Let her suffer in the magnitude of misery and pain she puts on the ones she calls friend!
    In all honesty, fuck her! let her die as she is now, alone and afraid for only her own life!
    SHE is as important to me as a single blade of grass is to the plains.
    NOTHING AT ALL!




    Submitted on 2008-12-27 06:44:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ... ... ... Wow... ... ... that poem reminds me of the love I once felt and now no longer feel. I think the context is just buetiful for those of an angry or broken love. I other than dismal_s child no offence to her do not believe in unconditional love because there is always something that some one wants to change about their love and partner. I used to believe in it though till my ex tried to change everything about me. But yes this peice has deffinatly touch the dark, deep reaches of my soul and remound this soul of the pain inside and i thank you for that. You are an inspiration to me.
    | Posted on 2009-01-06 00:00:00 | by Sepheroth432 | [ Reply to This ]
      So angry love. So angry. Understandable, under these conditons, but still. I love you. Simple, unconditional, love without an end.

    So Smile.
    | Posted on 2008-12-27 00:00:00 | by dismal_s child | [ Reply to This ]


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