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    dots Submission Name: Since You Were Askingdots
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    Author: UnderlinedInRed
    ASL Info:    18/f/PA
    Elite Ratio:    4.24 - 196/262/123
    Words: 352
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Description:
       Random. I was in a bad mood and it was supposed to be venting but I wanted it to actually be something.

    Its not that great, but its just the idea I wanted to get out.


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    dotsSince You Were Askingdots
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    There are four main problems with being a twin:

    1. Questions:

    That I am so used to answering
    The answers are instantaneous
    And I can speak them in 4 languages.

    Yes, we are twins.

    One minute apart.

    No we can not read each others minds.

    No we will not have a threesome with you.

    2. Friends

    She is my best friend,
    My closest friend.
    And the friend who knows
    Every single detail about my whole entire life.

    I couldn't live a day on the planet without her.

    We share the same friends

    Yes we fight, but over them and not about each other.


    3. Personalities

    We are different. She dresses wildly, randomly, and steals my clothes. She plays servant and does community service and runs for miles. Doesn't mean I don't, she just does it more. We shape our relationships around who we need in our lives. She needs me, I need her. So she needs someone who is willing to tell her what is what, bluntly and plainly. But I need someone who can help me out, treat me gently and kindly.

    Its weird that since we tried so hard to be different, we end up needing exactly what we made each other become.

    We need each other.

    But her kindness makes me guilty.

    4. Comparisons

    When we fail, in life, in relationships, in work, we look to each other. We look to how well the other did. Tests in math, in science.

    So when I fail, I fail ten times more.

    When I succeed, I succeed ten times stronger.

    And when we succeed together, it is like the world has lifted us.

    But when we fail together, we cry on each others shoulders until the pain heals.


    ---So since you asked,
    I thought you should know.
    There is no where in this world
    I would rather go
    Than with my sister
    Hand in hand
    Although I have failed,
    With her---I won't again.





    Submitted on 2008-12-27 23:15:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      it is a nice rant
    i would imagine that being a twin would get tiresome once in a while from all the questions everyone automatically asks.

    i love that you can answer in 4 different languages. its almost like it encapsulates just how sick of these questions you are and it would be awesome to answer the person in a language they dont understand since they have no idea anyways.

    yup.

    i think you rant has been justified and it is something more than a rant. i like the way you have listed everything as if you are preparing for a debate of sorts. the way everything is so categorically set out and easily available to call upon when the need arises.

    its awesome you have the relationship you have with your sister. i hope you continue to be what the other needs all throughout life
    | Posted on 2008-12-28 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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