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    dots Submission Name: Jumping for youdots
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    Author: Fadeintoreality
    Elite Ratio:    1.95 - 33/114/64
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsJumping for youdots
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    I have been dreaming of taking a hold of
    a new life with you
    and I don't know if I can reach far enough to grab it
    for I stand here
    miles away
    over a hole with no end
    should I stand here
    on the other side
    wishing?
    or should I reach out
    take a leap
    and
    possibly
    fall?




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