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    dots Submission Name: You crashed a camarodots
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    Author: EEKS
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    Words: 104
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    dotsYou crashed a camarodots
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    You are lovely and I am sorry to have lost you.
    However, I am lovely too and I am sorry you lost me.

    Days go by and I wonder
    What is so endearing about experience?
    I have never found someone at 60 appealing
    Although it is likely
    They could teach me everything

    I do not even remember what it was like to be with you.
    I wonder if, in ten years or so
    I won't remember him too
    I hope not, he holds my hand so sweetly
    Maybe the pictures will tell me
    What it felt like, although yours don't




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