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    dots Submission Name: Wisdom teeth removaldots
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    Author: EEKS
    Elite Ratio:    2.82 - 647/1087/624
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    I am off pills.
    Too many painkillers, I can't feel my cheeks anymore
    and the bruises are bright yellow now, spilling across my jawbones.
    I am also off smart choices, romantic comedies and porn.

    If I saw you tomorrow, you would be blue eyes, sunshine, fingerpaint, nostalgia, Pacman.
    When I met you, you were marijuana, promises, bony shoulders, cold, broken windows.
    You never break in anymore.
    I haven't written a sad song in weeks.

    This is time, what it does to us.




    Submitted on 2008-12-28 08:16:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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