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    dots Submission Name: What the Mirror Divides..dots
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    Author: vanhokinshtyl
    ASL Info:    8/M/UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 119/200/71
    Words: 228
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 722
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1559



    Description:
       dialogue/duet.


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    dotsWhat the Mirror Divides..dots
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    HIM:
    (You know that) I've got a lot of things to say
    (Just) Before i let you go
    But there's only one thing left to do
    And i love you so i'll go

    HER:
    (I know that) You've got a lot of things to say
    (Just) Before you let me go
    Your biggest fear's a four letter word
    So just drop two and say 'no'

    HIM:
    'Maybe she wants me to die'
    (She's sure not stickin around)
    'If she wants me to die,
    Then she's not coming back and i don't care!'
    'She threw this look at me,
    It's difficult to see
    (That) she loves me
    When she's not comin back.. (and) I don't care'

    BOTH:
    (We know that) We've got a lot on our chests,
    And our hearts are next in line,
    Whatever helps me to forget
    I'll use to get you off my mind

    HER:
    'Maybe he wants me to die'
    (He's sure not stickin around)
    'If he wants me to die,
    Then he's not coming back and i don't care!'
    'He placed the blame on me,
    It's difficult to see
    (That) he loves me
    When he's not comin back.. (and) I don't care'

    MIRROR:
    (You wonder what's on the other side?
    But you can't see what the mirror divides..)

    BOTH:
    ALL I CARE FOR IN THIS LIFE IS CHANGE..




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    ||| Comments |||
      Very good idea for a song, but it could be a bit better. Instead of using alot of cliché phrases, tie it in with some that aren't. But this is the type of lyric that makes me want to hear a song like this.
    | Posted on 2009-01-08 00:00:00 | by hybridsongwrite | [ Reply to This ]


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