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    dots Submission Name: I Willdots
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    Author: poisenedvanity
    ASL Info:    20/f/texas
    Elite Ratio:    1.93 - 0/2/30
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Poetry/Cutting or Mutilation
    Total Views: 603
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 566



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    dotsI Willdots
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    I will go home
    I will use them
    I wonít write down my feelings
    You will be angry with me
    And frankly I donít care
    You wonít like what Iíll do
    But this the only way Iíll be able to breathe
    This is the only way Iíll be able to see my pain
    I will see this to the end
    I will see it fall
    You can not stop me
    The pull is stronger then you and I both
    I can no longer fight it
    You and I both know this will end badly
    And yet I do this each night in vein






    Submitted on 2008-12-31 05:53:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      cutting? i used to cut. hopefully you wrote instead of cut. :)
    if you need someone to talk too... let me know.

    not to put ya down... but it seems that you barely tapped into that raw emotion. don't be afraid to put it out there. it helps, well for me anyways...
    | Posted on 2008-12-31 00:00:00 | by desolateheart | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.


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