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    dots Submission Name: Grant Me The Strengthdots
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    Author: Crestfallenman
    ASL Info:    21/M/CA
    Elite Ratio:    4.72 - 603/832/350
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 101
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 700



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       Happy New Year yall, I haven't been on this site in a very long time, but I think it's time to post a new poem. Hope yall like this one.


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    dotsGrant Me The Strengthdots
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    A new day, a new age to live,
    A new moment to seize, a new story to give,
    If there was a place I could dream,
    Would it be beautiful as it actually seems,

    I see the time ticking by,
    I remember the darkest times I would cry,
    But the disease has been cured here,
    And I just want to be happy in the coming years.

    So much to see, so much to do,
    This time I promise to stick these times through,
    So when the world falls all around me,
    It won't take the best of what could be.

    It's time to move on with life,
    As I have done so well.

    I pray I can keep moving this way.




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