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    dots Submission Name: So this is it. Welcome to the New Year.dots
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    Author: EEKS
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    dotsSo this is it. Welcome to the New Year.dots
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    A brand shiny New Year, and my blender
    is a mess, a wreck and I find myself
    much too tired to run the dishwasher
    or pour the rest of the vodka in the sink

    It is 2 hours into my New Year
    and I find myself exhausted, falling
    back onto the couch and watching the specials

    I have kissed no one and I
    have drank no water, worn no clothes
    danced no new dances

    And this will be my year
    No new dances, no new songs
    No one but you and I, vodka and ice




    Submitted on 2009-01-01 08:35:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Our new years sound similar.
    I couldn't pour that vodka down my throat quick enough.

    Nice write.
    I've been meaning to post, but i just don't have the energy.

    | Posted on 2009-01-13 00:00:00 | by taramarie | [ Reply to This ]
      Vodka and Ice, and a brand new year! Doesn't sound so bad!

    Nice write, and happy new year!
    | Posted on 2009-01-01 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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