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    dots Submission Name: Pamphlets of Prophetsdots

    Author: col13x
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    Pamphlets of Prophets

    And in the barren face of sanity
    I scavenged
    For hope

    Hope between the bleeding

    Full forces littered the bodies
    Pamphlets of prophets
    In useless streets

    Streets paved with dead

    Burning crosses
    Burning flags
    The caricatures of hate

    Hate in the Holy walls and domes of

    And in the coloured face of madness
    I found the ever smile
    Of borrowed light

    Light in the Holy walls and domes of

    Death in weeping children sung its dirge
    In the sacrificial arms of

    Love ?

    What love is there between the ruins of bone and shattered blood
    Siren screaming its danger to flesh
    This Auschwitz strip
    This apocalypse
    Is a lament unheeded
    Of starved and parchment skeletons
    Turning in their graves
    Piteous demise of theirs

    Full forces littered the bodies
    Pamphlets of prophets
    In useless streets

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