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    dots Submission Name: Pamphlets of Prophetsdots
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    Author: col13x
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    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsPamphlets of Prophetsdots
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    Pamphlets of Prophets

    And in the barren face of sanity
    I scavenged
    For hope

    Hope between the bleeding
    Stain

    Full forces littered the bodies
    Pamphlets of prophets
    In useless streets

    Streets paved with dead
    Dreams

    Burning crosses
    Burning flags
    The caricatures of hate

    Hate in the Holy walls and domes of
    Jerusalem

    And in the coloured face of madness
    I found the ever smile
    Of borrowed light

    Light in the Holy walls and domes of
    Death

    Death in weeping children sung its dirge
    In the sacrificial arms of
    Love

    Love ?

    What love is there between the ruins of bone and shattered blood
    Siren screaming its danger to flesh
    This Auschwitz strip
    This apocalypse
    Is a lament unheeded
    Of starved and parchment skeletons
    Turning in their graves
    Piteous demise of theirs
    Wasted

    Full forces littered the bodies
    Pamphlets of prophets
    In useless streets










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