Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Sagacitydots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 449
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 566



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsSagacitydots
    -------------------------------------------


    Sagacity

    Pulled from the beating heart
    This quick agony
    Spells

    For what wrong thought to be
    Became so easily
    Right

    So right the languid exponent
    Of ready truth
    Knew

    With the arrogance of comprehension
    Gave its struggle
    Righteousness

    And in the pity of hindsight
    Woke consciousness to
    Regret

    For what right thought to be
    Became so easily
    Wrong









    Submitted on 2009-01-03 15:08:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    169627

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    In the Mouth of Elysium written by HisNameIsNoMore
    new moon written by CrypticBard
    Fathoms of the Lullaby Sea written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Devils in the Details written by endlessgame23
    Hopelessly Blind written by ForgottenGraves
    One Thing written by Wolfwatching
    Linger written by saartha
    Sunset written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Life changes in a moment written by Ramneet
    Push written by JanePlane
    Pressure written by hybridsongwrite
    untitled written by Chelebel
    What happens written by Wolfwatching
    To written by SavedDragon
    Trails written by Daniel Barlow
    A Sonnet for Nina written by SavedDragon
    Pain, an elixir. written by Ramneet
    Wavelength written by saartha
    Hollow Points written by RequiemOfDreams
    In My Head written by faideddarkness
    102.3 written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Once Again written by krs3332003
    Bond written by saartha
    This written by Chelebel
    I will call out your name written by RisingSon
    Deaf Dumb and Blind is no excuse written by poetotoe
    Treasure Chest written by PieceOfCake
    It's been a while written by Sharati_hottie
    Our Cinder Crisis written by SavedDragon
    May 31 2018 written by Chelebel

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry