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Author:	mae
Elite Ratio:	5.97 - 596/642/259
Words:	131

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
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Vow

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I shall love you
when it isn't convenient.
I shall listen
though I don't understand.
I shall share your
tears
and my laughter
with you.
I shall stand by you
though standing may be difficult.
I shall smile with you
when tears would
more easily come.
I shall not blame
you for the hard times
nor claim the credit
for the good.
I will speak well
of you
when others don't.
I will hold you up
when you're ready
to fall.
My days and nights
will belong
only to you.
My steps will
shadow only
yours.
My eyes will seek
your eyes alone
and I will whisper
my secrets
to none but you.
And when we are old,
I will tell you
I love you.

Submitted on 2009-01-03 17:59:36 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This was fantastic Mae! Every guy reading this sighs quietly to himself and thinks "oh, how I wish"!

Nice work, lovely lady!
| Posted on 2009-01-04 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
  That's beautiful. You're no Cyrano De Bergerac but you write some damn nice vows. They're everything that anybody should want someone to promise them. However, in the real cruel world, I find that keeping those kinds of vows only works if the other person keeps the same vows... but, ideally, to me, the vows that you've made are the foundation to a very beautiful love. But, I think that you know that someone really loves you, when they are willing to make and to keep the same promises that you are for as long as you both are alive. I say that setting a doctrine of vows for every couple to follow is a good way to break down relationships. It's not so much about the vows themselves, though yours are ideal, but that they are the mutual agreement of the two people who pronounce them. Remember to make sure that the vows that you set for yourself are the same ones that your lover will. And, if need be, remember that leveling compromises in the beginning is the best way to avoid conflict in the outcome. Because two people with two sets of vows, aka: rules, will both end up breaking some down the road. Romance is wonderful, but you want romance that won't die when you're calculating out taxes and realizing that someone needs another job to keep the home running. You want romance that isn't going to falter when you've got three kids and one of them decided to flush a cell phone on the same day that you're going to get fired if you don't turn in the big report, you can't blame the child so the natural reaction is to blame another parent... if you're going to vow not be throwing blame around, then you've got to take these situations into account. Not trying to kill the romance... because people are capable of going through the ordinary world with their extraordinary love still intact... but, only when they don't demean their kind and extraordinary love just because life is all too ordinary and cruel.
| Posted on 2009-01-04 00:00:00 | by alittlebithippy | [ Reply to This ]
  omg that was the most amzing love poem ive read this far. i loved it. ive been trying to think of everthing ive wanted to say to the boy i love and nothing seemed to make since when i wore it down, but its like u just wore it all.lol.
it was very good u did a lovely job, who ever u worte this about is a very lucky person.

tayla aka sick of hurting u
| Posted on 2009-01-04 00:00:00 | by SickOfHurting U | [ Reply to This ]

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