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    dots Submission Name: I'll Kill You With This Spoondots
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    Author: KillSpoon
    ASL Info:    15/f/CAN
    Elite Ratio:    5.48 - 9/5/7
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 80
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 817



    Description:
       Written in July of 2008


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    dotsI'll Kill You With This Spoondots
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    If you ever come at me again with that knife

    I’ll kill you with this spoon

    I wouldn’t start making plans

    Because I’m sure that day will come soon



    You cut me with that

    I’ll surely pop your eye out

    So let’s just not try it

    Because I don’t want to see you sit and pout



    You even touch me once

    I’m going to shove this down your throat

    So baby lets not go there

    Because I’m not ready to get my coat



    If you ever come at me again with that knife

    I’ll kill you with this spoon

    So I wouldn’t start making plans

    Because I’m sure that day will come soon




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      As viscious as this is, it is ubruptly short, to the point that the ending is startling. I think there is more to it hiding in your head, and that you could do laot more with it if you tried.

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    | Posted on 2009-01-13 00:00:00 | by ThisIsReal | [ Reply to This ]



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