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    dots Submission Name: Legacydots
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    Author: The Wolverine
    ASL Info:    23/M/MA
    Elite Ratio:    4.51 - 74/137/91
    Words: 358
    Class/Type: Rant/Serious
    Total Views: 632
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    Bytes: 1920



    Description:
       This is from four years ago. I still have some of these problems for sure, but now I know what I want to do with my life, I'm in college, and things are going better than they have in quite some time.

    Even so, some of those negative thoughts and silly doubts I can never confirm as true or false will slip into my mind.


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    The fact that we are mortal dooms us all to die. The situations that present themselves to us will shape the people we are, but who is to say that one small difference wouldn't have changed the life? A coward can become a hero, if given the chance, or the opposite.

    The way you are remembered is the only thing you leave behind. It will end, how and when is unknown, but what you do until then is your choice. You can leave no legacy, if you choose to do so. Memories of you others have will share
    you with the world.

    I don't know. I've just been thinking a lot about what I am going to do with my life. Do I even have to at this point?

    I'm only 16, but in three years I will be faced with college. After that I am supposed to go out and get a career. I'm not ready, and I hope that changes.

    You will never truly know anybody, because at any given moment they could be lying to you, holding back or not being themself.
    It's better to never think about that, but that thought pops into my head every now and then. It really does bothers me. I try not to do it myself, but I'm guilty. I do it too.

    I do. I know I act differently around certain people. I can't tell how most of the time but its been commented on by people i trust and love.

    I don't know if I think too much or not enough.

    I just came to a decision. I don't care what the hell happens to me. At all. The only thing I want is to be happy. Truly happy. Not the bullshit kind where you are just denying yourself other emotions. If I can acheive that, I can live peacefully.

    I'm in a good mood. You can have some if you like. Just leave a little for me, Please?

    Don't take things for granted.
    Think about everything you have going for you.




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      Hm, again, I like this post, you are doing quite well! Inthe second paragraph, the last line of it "you with the world" really stuck with me. It was as if I was affiliating myself with the world if you will. Such things that are considered good or bad in people's eyes. But anywho, I like the whole legacy idea. It is one that few people look forward to, lol. This I know, I am 18 and hopefully attending my local college in the fall, but really, I just want to relax and live day by day. I'm not exactly ready to grow up just yet. I like the part about some people choosing to leave behind a legacy or not. If you really think about it, everyone leaves some sort of legacy whether good or bad. I really enjoyed this. I indeed like your work. Good job.

    Much love,
    ~Annie~
    | Posted on 2009-01-06 00:00:00 | by unnamedtear | [ Reply to This ]


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